Turn it up a little up louder...
At first I was thinking "Nah, there isn't gonna be any vocals for this", but as the song goes along, it finally shows up. This is a really impressive song, and yet you guys can do so much more with it. I really like all the guitar work and all that, sounds a wee bit mesmerizing to me. What you guys needed improving on is the sound; it needs to get turned up some more. It sounds a little hard, if not turned up all the way, to hear the song. Also, try to find a better mic.
A pretty good song, yet so much can be done.
4/5 & 8/10